We print out the a rough booklet that do not have a consistent visual style yet. Critiques from students: • There is not a consistent colour palette on the brief. The grey on page 4 and page 6 are different. • There are some grammatical error on the page • The insight page need to be simplified • The response page should present more information about "Taro" (Less specific to media more detail ed in concept) • keep developing the 5 ways of well-being page (or just write down 4 ways instead) • The font size could be smaller • The Maori language on the "five ways" page is not clear. The reader might not be able to understand what those words mean • The illustration style differs from previous page • The "5 ways" page should be more specific to "how can we help Taro to keep learning in a new environment?" Plan of development: According to the time remains for us, we decide to use photos rather than illustration on the book...